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The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
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The bar graph illustrates the result of a survey about the purchasing and consumption habits of
citizens
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 from five
cities
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 in Australia.
Overall
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, among five Australian
cities
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 (
Sydney
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,
Melbourne
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, Brisban, Adelaide,
Hobart
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) only Adelaide shows a different habit trend amongst its
citizens
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 in the
last
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 4 weeks, where people prefer purchasing
instant
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coffee
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 rather than buying fresh
coffee
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 or even going to a
cafe
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'. Between the four
cities
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 that have similar trends, going to a
cafe
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' was more popular than other options. Going to a
cafe
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' was a preferred option for 62% of
citizens
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 in
Hobart
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 and
Melbourne
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,
while
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 in
Sydney
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 it was roughly 60% of people mentioned it as their first choice. In Brisbane, the result shows 55% are eager to go to a
cafe
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'. The second favourable choice for these four places is acquiring
instant
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coffee
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.
Hobart
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 and Brisban with 51% desire for
instant
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coffee
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 and
Melbourne
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 and
Sydney
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 with 58% and 53%, respectively, select
instant
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coffee
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 among other options. The least popular item in all four
cities
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 is a fresh
coffee
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 purchase, which is selected in
Sydney
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 and
Melbourne
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 by approximately 42% of residents. 38% of
citizens
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 in
Hobart
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 decided to have fresh
coffee
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, and
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finally
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,finally
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 32% of the Brisban community chose
this
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 option. Adelaide is the only place amongst all five places where the highest rate belongs to the people who preferred
instant
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coffee
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 (50%). 39% of the city's residents chose to go to a
cafe
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' and
lastly
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, 32% bought fresh
coffee
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.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words citizens, cities, sydney, melbourne, hobart, instant, coffee, cafe with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • preference
  • beverage
  • caffeine
  • demographics
  • trend
  • survey
  • cultural significance
  • habit
  • seasonal variation
  • health consciousness
  • availability
  • implications
  • urban vs. rural consumption
  • data interpretation
  • quantitative analysis
  • fluctuations
  • patterns
  • peak times
  • economical impact
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