The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
The bar graph illustrates the result of a survey about the purchasing and consumption habits of
citizens
from five cities
in Australia.
Overall
, among five Australian cities
(Sydney
, Melbourne
, Brisban, Adelaide, Hobart
) only Adelaide shows a different habit trend amongst its citizens
in the last
4 weeks, where people prefer purchasing instant
coffee
rather than buying fresh coffee
or even going to a cafe
'. Between the four cities
that have similar trends, going to a cafe
' was more popular than other options.
Going to a cafe
' was a preferred option for 62% of citizens
in Hobart
and Melbourne
, while
in Sydney
it was roughly 60% of people mentioned it as their first choice. In Brisbane, the result shows 55% are eager to go to a cafe
'. The second favourable choice for these four places is acquiring instant
coffee
. Hobart
and Brisban with 51% desire for instant
coffee
and Melbourne
and Sydney
with 58% and 53%, respectively, select instant
coffee
among other options. The least popular item in all four cities
is a fresh coffee
purchase, which is selected in Sydney
and Melbourne
by approximately 42% of residents. 38% of citizens
in Hobart
decided to have fresh coffee
, and finally
32% of the Brisban community chose Add a comma
,finally
this
option.
Adelaide is the only place amongst all five places where the highest rate belongs to the people who preferred instant
coffee
(50%). 39% of the city's residents chose to go to a cafe
' and lastly
, 32% bought fresh coffee
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words citizens, cities, sydney, melbourne, hobart, instant, coffee, cafe with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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