The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
The bar graph illustrates the result of a survey about the purchasing and consumption habits of
citizens
from five
cities
in Australia.
Overall
, among five Australian
cities
(
Sydney
,
Melbourne
, Brisban, Adelaide,
Hobart
) only Adelaide shows a different habit trend amongst its
citizens
in the
last
4 weeks, where people prefer purchasing
instant
coffee
rather than buying fresh
coffee
or even going to a
cafe
'. Between the four
cities
that have similar trends, going to a
cafe
' was more popular than other options. Going to a
cafe
' was a preferred option for 62% of
citizens
in
Hobart
and
Melbourne
,
while
in
Sydney
it was roughly 60% of people mentioned it as their first choice. In Brisbane, the result shows 55% are eager to go to a
cafe
'. The second favourable choice for these four places is acquiring
instant
coffee
.
Hobart
and Brisban with 51% desire for
instant
coffee
and
Melbourne
and
Sydney
with 58% and 53%, respectively, select
instant
coffee
among other options. The least popular item in all four
cities
is a fresh
coffee
purchase, which is selected in
Sydney
and
Melbourne
by approximately 42% of residents. 38% of
citizens
in
Hobart
decided to have fresh
coffee
, and
finally
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32% of the Brisban community chose
this
option. Adelaide is the only place amongst all five places where the highest rate belongs to the people who preferred
instant
coffee
(50%). 39% of the city's residents chose to go to a
cafe
' and
lastly
, 32% bought fresh
coffee
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words citizens, cities, sydney, melbourne, hobart, instant, coffee, cafe with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • preference
  • beverage
  • caffeine
  • demographics
  • trend
  • survey
  • cultural significance
  • habit
  • seasonal variation
  • health consciousness
  • availability
  • implications
  • urban vs. rural consumption
  • data interpretation
  • quantitative analysis
  • fluctuations
  • patterns
  • peak times
  • economical impact
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