The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The bar graph illustrates the result of a survey about the purchasing and consumption habits of
citizens
Use synonyms
from five
cities
Use synonyms
in Australia.
Overall
Linking Words
, among five Australian
cities
Use synonyms
(
Sydney
Use synonyms
,
Melbourne
Use synonyms
, Brisban, Adelaide,
Hobart
Use synonyms
) only Adelaide shows a different habit trend amongst its
citizens
Use synonyms
in the
last
Linking Words
4 weeks, where people prefer purchasing
instant
Use synonyms
coffee
Use synonyms
rather than buying fresh
coffee
Use synonyms
or even going to a
cafe
Use synonyms
'. Between the four
cities
Use synonyms
that have similar trends, going to a
cafe
Use synonyms
' was more popular than other options. Going to a
cafe
Use synonyms
' was a preferred option for 62% of
citizens
Use synonyms
in
Hobart
Use synonyms
and
Melbourne
Use synonyms
,
while
Linking Words
in
Sydney
Use synonyms
it was roughly 60% of people mentioned it as their first choice. In Brisbane, the result shows 55% are eager to go to a
cafe
Use synonyms
'. The second favourable choice for these four places is acquiring
instant
Use synonyms
coffee
Use synonyms
.
Hobart
Use synonyms
and Brisban with 51% desire for
instant
Use synonyms
coffee
Use synonyms
and
Melbourne
Use synonyms
and
Sydney
Use synonyms
with 58% and 53%, respectively, select
instant
Use synonyms
coffee
Use synonyms
among other options. The least popular item in all four
cities
Use synonyms
is a fresh
coffee
Use synonyms
purchase, which is selected in
Sydney
Use synonyms
and
Melbourne
Use synonyms
by approximately 42% of residents. 38% of
citizens
Use synonyms
in
Hobart
Use synonyms
decided to have fresh
coffee
Use synonyms
, and
Linking Words
finally
Add a comma
,finally
show examples
32% of the Brisban community chose
this
Linking Words
option. Adelaide is the only place amongst all five places where the highest rate belongs to the people who preferred
instant
Use synonyms
coffee
Use synonyms
(50%). 39% of the city's residents chose to go to a
cafe
Use synonyms
' and
lastly
Linking Words
, 32% bought fresh
coffee
Use synonyms
.
Submitted by sajadtorab on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words citizens, cities, sydney, melbourne, hobart, instant, coffee, cafe with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • preference
  • beverage
  • caffeine
  • demographics
  • trend
  • survey
  • cultural significance
  • habit
  • seasonal variation
  • health consciousness
  • availability
  • implications
  • urban vs. rural consumption
  • data interpretation
  • quantitative analysis
  • fluctuations
  • patterns
  • peak times
  • economical impact
What to do next:
Look at other essays: