The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
The bar graph illustrates the result of a survey about the purchasing and consumption habits of
citizens
from five Use synonyms
cities
in Australia.
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Overall
, among five Australian Linking Words
cities
(Use synonyms
Sydney
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Melbourne
, Brisban, Adelaide, Use synonyms
Hobart
) only Adelaide shows a different habit trend amongst its Use synonyms
citizens
in the Use synonyms
last
4 weeks, where people prefer purchasing Linking Words
instant
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coffee
rather than buying fresh Use synonyms
coffee
or even going to a Use synonyms
cafe
'. Between the four Use synonyms
cities
that have similar trends, going to a Use synonyms
cafe
' was more popular than other options.
Going to a Use synonyms
cafe
' was a preferred option for 62% of Use synonyms
citizens
in Use synonyms
Hobart
and Use synonyms
Melbourne
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while
in Linking Words
Sydney
it was roughly 60% of people mentioned it as their first choice. In Brisbane, the result shows 55% are eager to go to a Use synonyms
cafe
'. The second favourable choice for these four places is acquiring Use synonyms
instant
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coffee
. Use synonyms
Hobart
and Brisban with 51% desire for Use synonyms
instant
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coffee
and Use synonyms
Melbourne
and Use synonyms
Sydney
with 58% and 53%, respectively, select Use synonyms
instant
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coffee
among other options. The least popular item in all four Use synonyms
cities
is a fresh Use synonyms
coffee
purchase, which is selected in Use synonyms
Sydney
and Use synonyms
Melbourne
by approximately 42% of residents. 38% of Use synonyms
citizens
in Use synonyms
Hobart
decided to have fresh Use synonyms
coffee
, and Use synonyms
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finally
32% of the Brisban community chose Add a comma
,finally
this
option.
Adelaide is the only place amongst all five places where the highest rate belongs to the people who preferred Linking Words
instant
Use synonyms
coffee
(50%). 39% of the city's residents chose to go to a Use synonyms
cafe
' and Use synonyms
lastly
, 32% bought fresh Linking Words
coffee
.Use synonyms
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