The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.
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The line graphs provide information about the amount of funds spent
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from 2008 to 2014.
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, more money Linking Words
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football in 2008 and the amount was around 8 Change preposition
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