The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.
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The line graphs provide information about the amount of funds spent
to
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children
’s sports
by British parents and participation
of these Correct article usage
the participation
children’s
in three different Change noun form
children
sports
from 2008 to 2014.
Overall
, more money spent
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was spent
to
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children
’s sports
over the 6-year period. According to
the participation
, the most dramatic change was seen in the figures for athletics.
In 2008, British families spent 20 pounds
on their children
’s sports
on a monthly basis. The amount of the
money sharply increased after 2008. It nearly reached Correct article usage
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to
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the
25 Correct article usage
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pounds
per month in 2010 and in 2012 it was about 28 pounds
. By 2014, average
monthly spend on Correct article usage
the average
children
’s sport
had risen to approximately 33 Fix the agreement mistake
sports
pounds
.
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participation
, most of the British children
enrolled to
football in 2008 and the amount was around 8 Change preposition
on
million
. In six years, the number of children
participated
in football increased a little and peaked Wrong verb form
participating
to
8.5 Change preposition
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million
. While
swimming was the second popular
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most popular
sports
activity in Britain among children
2008
with nearly 2.4 Change preposition
in 2008
million
participation
, athletics was less than approximately less than 1 Replace the word
participants
million
. Swimming rose slightly and reached to
about 4.8 Change preposition
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million
in 2014. By 2014, participation
in athletics had risen to around 5 million
children
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