Some individuals say that the loss of fauna is the major environmental issue that we encountering
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nowadays. I totally disagree with
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air
pollution
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important than
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various reasons why I believe there are very environmental
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than dying out of species.
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animals
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our dependence
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meat will become less.
Secondly
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life
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is
air
pollution
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pollution
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a threat to human health .
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contamination can
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more vulnerable to
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serious diseases namely, cancer,
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will melt and cause
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of sea levels.
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we will expect more natural disasters namely,floods,
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weather, which
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will
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considerable damage
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homes
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To sum up
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namely,
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pollution
,
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warming are very significant problems we face in
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world
than dying out of species, because
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and global warming have
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