The map shows the comparison of changes in the library before and after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. Write within 150 words.

The map shows the comparison of changes in the library before

and after five years.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main

features and making comparisons where relevant. Write within 150

words.
The map illustrates the changes that took place in the
library
over 5 years.
Overall
,
Library
had a complete makeover over 5 years.
In contrast
new subjects and facilities were added to the
library
. In regard to the updated
Library
, the Entrance, Stairs and Liberarian Desk area remain unaltered in the south bottom.
Whereas
they have added a new facility like two computers above the stairs.
In addition
, the tables are redesigned as a Long rectangular bench, which has reduced to the count of 4 sets, before it is used to be an individual desk. On the right side of the worktable, the newspapers and periodicals have been replaced with Films and DVDs by the end of the period. Looking at the left corner shelf, they have upgraded it with different types of books compared to 5 years before
such
as History, Fiction, Self Help, Kitchen, Economics and Law . On the North-top they added new sets of books for children and they have
also
allocated a place below it for the "children's area".
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • comparison
  • significant changes
  • modernize
  • technological facilities
  • computer stations
  • digital book borrowing
  • interactive learning
  • family-friendly spaces
  • cafe or lounge area
  • social interaction
  • open spaces
  • flexible seating arrangements
  • collaborative work
  • community events
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