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You recently notice a local restaurant offering a part time job Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter •Explain that you would like to apply for this job •Give some details of relevant experience that you have •specify the date and time that would suit for you You should write at least 150 words You don’t write any address

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to the response for the job of chef advertised in the local newspaper by your
restaurant
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 named Lake View. As the
restaurant
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 serves
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apply
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Italian cuisine to the people.
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Moreover
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 it has won
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apply
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numerous number of award and it is recognised as one of the top 10 places in the city to visit. I would like to apply for the job as a chef to gain experience in Italian cuisine so that it can become a stepping stone in my career and in future
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 want to open a
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 on my own. I studied hospitality at the Culinary Institute of America and I am currently working for Biscotti
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 for
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 1 year as a chef
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 I have worked for Hotel Taj for 2 years. I can manage the budget and I have experience to prepare menus and Sunday brunch which is famous in the cities as it serves
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 choice of food to the guest. I would like you to tell me when to come for the interview so that I can be prepared for that day .  I look forward to hearing from you soon.  Yours faithfully,  Mangesh Sharma

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