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The plans below show the layout of a university's sport centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map presents the layout of the current university's
sports
centre
 and the planned layout after renovation.
Overall
, the most noticeable future changes are the expansion of the building at both the West and East wings, replacing outdoor courts. The original building in the
centre
 will not be renovated, except for the gym, which will be enlarged. In the present map, the
sports
centre
 only has
one
 main building. When
one
 enters the place from the South, the reception can be seen straight ahead. There are two entrances on both sides of the reception, with changing room on the west side and seating on the east side.
One
 can enter the changeroom to go to the 25m pool in the
centre
 of the place.
Although
 there are currently two outdoor courts in both wings, they will be changed into a new
sports
 arena. Upon redevelopment, a
sports
 shop will be added on the left and there is a new changing room that connects to a leisure pool in the west wing. On the east side, there is the addition of a cafe and another changing room. If
one
 takes a walk through the alley where a
sports
 hall and two dancing rooms are located, there is a gym in the north that will be enlarged after renovation.
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