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Some people believe that companies should manufacturing products that last for a long time. Others feel that the emphasis should be place on producing goods that are cheap. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Over the past few decades, there is a significant growth in the field of manufacturing. It is a public opinion that.- factories must produce long-lasting items
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 others say that,
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 which are getting cheaper must be produced by
companies
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. I strongly agree that
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companies
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 should produce long-lasting
products
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 at a minimal rate.
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 essay will discuss both views and my view in detail and reach a proper conclusion. In the modern era,
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 are looking for discounts on each
product
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. At the same time, they need good
quality
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products
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. Nowadays, most of the company maintain minimum
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 for their
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 in manufacturing.
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, If we buy any branded company vessel for cooking, it will
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 more than 10 years and
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 it is good for health to cook something in hallmarked vessels. Diseases like cancer can occur when we use bad-
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products
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.
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,
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 that
last
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 for a long time might have a high
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 but are it worth. Because, if we spend money for one time, we can use the
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 as much as can.
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, in the modern world, most
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 are buying
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 that have offers.
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, that
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 could be less lasting.
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, again they will buy the same
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.
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 is actually because they are spending Double the
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 for the same
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 which is equal to the
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 of the good
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product
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.
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, one of my friends by a non-stick pan
last
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 year for a cheaper
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, but the coating of the pan was lost within 6 months.
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, she brought another pan of good
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, and to ,date no damage happens.
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,In a country, most of the
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 are from middle-class families and everyone can afford the prices offered by the
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.
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 why they are running behind the offer of
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. So the company should focus on reducing the rate of
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 and selling good long-lasting
products
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 at cheaper prices. So ordinary
people
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 can
also
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 use
quality
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products
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.
To conclude
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,
companies
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 should implement some techniques, how to create long-lasting
products
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 at a cheaper rate. That will help
people
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 in every country.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • customer satisfaction
  • brand loyalty
  • cost-effective
  • replacement expenses
  • environmental impact
  • accessibility
  • innovation
  • variety
  • upfront costs
  • long-term investment
  • consumer behavior
  • market competition
  • affordability
  • frequent updates
  • short-term gains
  • maintenance expenses
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