Percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last 10 years discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing Trend

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has been noticed

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rise of 20% in the count of chubby juveniles in

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Western society .

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both the reasons behind

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of

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of overweight children

as well as

examine the consequences of

this

concerning topic. To initiate with, there are numerous causes why

kids

these days are suffering from obesity.Predominantly, unbalanced

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the major cause of

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weighted youngsters.For elaboration,in the Modern Times, parents do not have enough time

due to

that hectic

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.

Therefore

,they prefer to have readymade meals

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instead

of making the

food

by themselves .

In addition

,

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of cafes,

restaurants

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from door to door has played

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role in

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of

this

trend.

As a result

, the intake of

pre-processod

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pre-processed

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food

by youth has increased by a huge proportion.

Secondly

, with the advancement and easy accessibility of modern technology,

kids

have stopped indulging themselves

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physical activities.

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band their leisure with electronic gadgets.

For example

,

instead

of playing outdoor sports, children give reference to playing online games.

Consequently

, they have become couch potatoes with

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results in chubbiness.

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adverse effects of

this

disturbing trend are very considerable. The more

kids

start consuming junk

food

, the more they became to suffer from

health

hazards. Street

food

not only causes obesity,but

also

it is responsible for causing diabetes in

kids

.

Besides

diabetes,many other cardiovascular disorders are faced by teenagers.

For example

, to cure diabetes children are required to have insulin on

daily

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basis which makes them addicted to insulin.

Also

,insulin puts bad effects on other body organs.

As a consequence

,

kids

experience hazardous

health

issues.Despite

of

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causing

health related

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problems,the immunity

system

of youth

get

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also

weakens.The strength of

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system

depends upon the nutritional value of the

food

which is being eaten. the nutritional content of street

food

is not up to the mark .more over,lack of physical activities

also

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in

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of a minority

system

in cooking with the

disease causing

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factors, all the facts cannot be ignored.

To conclude

, poor diet and advancement of Technology rule

this

area of concern and impaired

health

and weak

defences

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system

are major

impact

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with your seen by Juveniles in

themodern

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the modern

society.