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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you to see you're advertisement in Australine magazine. I am interested to do
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 job.Recently I completed a child nursing course .Now I want to take a practical experience by looking after your child.I hope that practical experience makes me perfect for
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 positions. I did,t go to Australia if I get the job
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 I will get a new experience
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 I like to travel know about culture and language.I hope that I would be a suitable person for
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 position because my course knowledge help me to look after your child perfectly. if I had the chance to live with you would be great. I would spend my free time learning English and visiting tourist attractions,trying local food and making good friends. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter.Please feel free to contact me if you need
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 details and recommendations. Kind regards, Arif
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
  • Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
  • Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
  • Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
  • Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
  • Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment
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