In some countries, student pay their college or university fees, while in some others, the government pays for them. Do the advantages of governments paying for fees outweigh the disadvantages.

Firstly

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education

is more important now a day for students. So many

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continues

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have their own educational terms and conditions Students are paying

there

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their

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fees

for

collages

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colleges

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in some provisional.and some

counties

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county's

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government

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governments

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are providing

this

facility. In my

opinion

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if

government

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the government

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is paying

fees

for

education

it will be very helpful

below

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grade income parents . They can

also

think to send their child

for

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schooling. It will

very

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benificial

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beneficial

as a citizen of

country

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the country

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all people are

literates

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down

also

for

economical

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growth

country

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the country

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will be in a good position . There are

also

disadvantages if

government

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the government

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are paying

fees

for school.

Moreover

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parents are not serious about

education

and colleges. They are thinking

like

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that it's

a

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free of cost so they are taking very lightly to

education

and not sending their child to school.

Government

if

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is

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not taking any

fees

so in future they can face many funicular

problem

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problems

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to

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with

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managing the college and

also

paying the salary of staff and teachers. It will

also

effect

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affect

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economically

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them economically

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and

also

so many will not get

wedge

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a wedge

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of pay.