In the present era, children have fewer responsibilities than in the past. Some people consider this as a positive development, others see it as a negative trend. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Every generation has its own unique quirks,

this

one being that life is

overall

easier for everyone, especially children, who now have fewer responsibilities. Some

people

argue that

such

a change is bad,

others

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while others

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think it is a positive development. In my opinion, the latter is true, my essay will be discussing the argument provided.

To begin

with, teenagers having

less

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things to worry about may be considered a bad trend,

people

who go through

few

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a few

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hardships usually grow up to be irresponsible,

therefore

the entire next generation might be worse off than the previous ones. Another thing that comes into play is critical thinking, a child who has everything handed to them on a silver platter is less likely to plan, observe and think for themselves in a tough situation. Many cases can be provided as an example,

such

as signing contracts, mechanical repairs and etc. Adolescents conditioned to tricky situations through trial and error are more likely to get by in adulthood without major issues, compared to those who have not. Looking at the bright side, children spending their golden years relatively

stress free

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is a great improvement.

People

who had to worry less in childhood are highly likely to be mentally healthy. Rationally thinking citizens, without any

pent up

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trauma

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exactly what society needs in order to function. Another argument for

this

is that adolescents who do not have to worry about earning money or responsibilities can focus on

self improvement

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and their studies, leading to a much more educated generation. In conclusion, both points of view have a right to exist. Some

people

think that it is a negative trend,

others

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while others

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believe it to be a positive development. As mentioned before downsides and upsides are present, but in my opinion, it is a change in the right direction.