The given line chart illustrates the number of people in the UK commuting daily by three different vehicles from 1970 to 2030.
The line chart displays the number of people in the UK who use their daily routine
with
car, bus or train from 1970 to 2030.
Change preposition
by
Overall
, the figure of folk who prefer to use a private vehicle and the subway have
risen, Change the verb form
has
while
the consumption of bus has declined marginally. Also
, these trends will remain in the future until 2030.
According to
these statistics, the number of individuals has risen significantly in car usage from roughly 5 persons in 1970 until
approximately 8 in 2023 and it is predicted to stay at 9 millions-persons in 2030. Change preposition
to
Moreover
, regard in train consumption, there was a slight growth from 2 to 4 in 1970and
2020 respectively. The researchers forecast that will be nearly 6 million-person in 2030.
Correct your spelling
1970 and
It is clear that
,
the bus was the second place by about 4 million persons, Remove the comma
apply
while
that was a very marginal drop until 2020 and it stood at just 3 million-person in 2020. It will not change until 2030.Submitted by amirhsina on
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Vocabulary: The word "marginally" was used 2 times.
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