Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In the letter: Describe the problem and why you are unhappy Arrange for an engineer to visit your home Request a reduction in your bill

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Dear Mr Ali, I am writing to complain that the

internet

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service is not satisfactory in my home and that the

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shut

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down frequently and automatically. I am a student, and I mostly take online classes. Unfortunately, the

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speed is too low, and I am unable to take my online classes. I am very disturbed by

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issue, and I have missed my lectures as well. I have already reset the modem, but I am facing the same issue again.

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, after every hour, the modem restarts automatically. Kindly arrange for a serviceman to check my

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problem. The address of my house is MCB 13/84 Murree Road, Rawalpindi, and my cell number is 0987654321.

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, inform your worker to please contact me after 5 p.m. because after 5 p.m. I will be available at home. I have been facing

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issue since

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month.

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, I

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not pay the

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month’s bill, because I used a data connection in lieu of your

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service. Please reconsider my

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month’s

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bill. I hope

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matter will

resolve

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be resolved

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on a priority basis. Yours sincerely, XYZ

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

188 words

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Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In the letter: Describe the problem and why you are unhappy Arrange for an engineer to visit your home Request a reduction in your bill

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some parents believe that extra private lessons outside school hours, where students work alone with a teacher, can help them do better at school. Others disagree. What are the advantages and disadvantages of private tuition?

Some Young People are leaving the countryside to live in towns and cities, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans faces in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others believe that it is the responsibility of each individual to protect themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion