The chart below show the percentage of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other language in addition to english, in 2000 and 2010.
The pie charts illustrate the percentages of British undergraduates in England who had command over other languages than English in 2000 and 2010.
In general, what stands out from the graph is that
although
overall
percentage of Add an article
the overall
students
who were bilingual increased, French declined its proportion in popularity instead
of Spanish and other languages. At the same time, the percentage of trilingual students
also
climbed up whereas
monolingual students
went down in their figure.
To begin
with, while
two fifths
of the Add a hyphen
two-fifths
students
in the university could speak only English in 2000, the percentage was halved in
ten years later. Change preposition
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On the other hand
, the figure for those who enjoyed more than three languages including English increased by 5% within the decade from 10% to 15%.
Turing
to the breakdowns about bilingual Correct your spelling
Turning
students
, the most popular second language was Spanish throughout the designated period. The popularity witnessed 5% growth from 30% while
French
experienced the same amount of drop. Correct article usage
the French
However
, French
showed no difference in the percentages, standing at 10%. Meanwhile, we can Correct article usage
the French
also
see a 5% rise in the section represented
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