Some people think that the government should use extra money to fund programs to improve the environment. Others think that it is better for the government to spend money to support artistic programs. Which option do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

A bunch of

people

opine that the regime must invest more money to resolve the

pollution

problem from the

environment

whereas

others think that lawmakers

also

give attention to uplifting artistic programs

such

as music and theatre. I support the former statement because the

environment

is a first priority for everyone and

pollution

arises a major threat for all.

Firstly

, nature is like a mother

for

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everyone which gives everything whether food or shelter so, it is a social responsibility to keep it clean.

Therefore

,

government

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the government

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can organize camps and awareness programs to increase the interest of

people

toward

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nature.

For example

, the Indian government started a cleaning program in all cities and villages so, they can control

pollution

and build a healthy nation

as well as

promote growing more plants and

also

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the

people

who contribute to

this

program.

Secondly

,

pollution

is becoming

very

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a very

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dangerous threat

for

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the earth. Many problems arise in all countries like some areas are

effected

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affected

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with

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by

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floods and somewhere has droughts.

due

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to

this

global warming happens which means temperature increases day by day and

people

impose with serious problems like asthma and skin cancer. In

UK

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the UK

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studies show 80% of

people

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are effected

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effected

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affected

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with serious diseases

due to

pollution

so,

it

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is important to make the balance in the

environment

by reducing

the

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pollution

. In conclusion,

although

artistic programs are

also

important for entertainment , protecting the

environment

should be our first duty because without it nobody can survive

therefore

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,

people

need to clean their surroundings and don't put litter on roads as well.