The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram presents the yearly
income
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data of three bakeries in Calgary between 2000 and 2010.
Overall
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, Amandine Bakery's earnings in recent
years
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rise significantly when compared to those of
Bolo
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Cakey. Mari Bakeshop’s
income
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falls continuously despite the rise in the early
years
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.
First,
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the annual
income
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of Mari Bakeshop in 2010 was 80,000. It fluctuated between 2001 and 2004 at around 90,000 and 80,000.
However
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, it
then
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experienced a huge drop from 90,000 in 2004 to 40,000 in 2010. Next, Amandine Bakery’s earning was nearly 60,000 in 2000. Interestingly, it remained the same until 2005.
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, it experienced a considerable rise from 2006 at 60,000 to around 100,000 in 2010.
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, the
income
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of
Bolo
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Cakery fluctuated in the early
years
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. It was at 20,000 in 2000. It rose to nearly 40,000 in 2003 and
then
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remained the same for almost 4
years
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. The
income
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started rising in 2006 from 40,000 to 60,000 in 2008. After that, it rose slightly from that of 2008. In conclusion, the trends of Amandine Bakery and
Bolo
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Cakery were similar, but the Amadine earnings were higher than those of
Bolo
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Cakery. The Mari Bakeshop
income
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became the lowest
income
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in recent
years
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after witnessing an enormous drop.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, years, bolo with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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