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Some people think that children at school should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be spent on learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is important for children to study
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the art of foodstuffs in
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school but it is more important to learn subjects at
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school because other things can
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also
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house
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according to
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From my
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 viewpoint is discussed below.
Firstly
, it is good that the students learn about the art of food I don't think it
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 much helpful.
Secondly
, mainly the students should focus on
main
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 subjects.
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, if
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people
whould
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focus
 to subject about cooking
then
 it will be not much useful for them.
Thirdly
 if
a kids
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 like to
subject
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the
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 science of foodstuff
then
 they should be encouraged to do that because there
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 great opportunities in
filed
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 of cooking for both a male and a female.
For example
, if the community will be know how to do cooking
then
 it will be helpful for them very much and if the group will learn about only books
then
 they will not get more
knowleghe
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knowledge
 about life.
Hence
,
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institution should do those
actively
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 which kids like to do. In my opinion,
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institution should not focus
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 the subject
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the science of foodstuffs.
According to
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 it should be used for that,
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other
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 side there should be
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people to learn and do those
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 which they are interested
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 Conclusion It should
be ask
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 to
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group what they want to do and what they
dont
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do not
 want to do
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