The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how many breads,
buns
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and
pies
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are sold in a particular bakery in 2014.
Overall
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, It is noticeable that the
pies
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had good growth compared to the
bread
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and
buns
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.
In contrast
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, the
buns
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category faced a drop in sales by the end of the month. In regard to the first half year, A
bread
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started with the sale of $80,000 but faced a decline by Feb and it was
also
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fluctuating for the following
months
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till June, reached with a value of 68000.
Whereas
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Buns
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overlapped the
bread
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and was growing for the next four
months
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, with a rate of approximately 70,000, which was the maximum sale that happened in the first six
months
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. Meanwhile, the purchase of
pies
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was slightly improving for the past 6
months
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from $10,000 to $$18,000. Looking at the second half of the calendar,
Buns
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sales were stable for two
months
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and
then
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faced a significant fall by December with $30,000,
while
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the
bread
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gained back the sale it had in January at 80,000.
Likewise
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,
pies
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had a considerable increase in sales with $40,000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words buns, pies, bread, months with synonyms.
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