The charts below show the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarises the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. 

Summarises the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates how much the country has earned from exporting in 5 different categories and the table provides information about the proportion difference in each category for the years 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, petroleum products have a maximum earning compared to other categories in 2016.
In contrast
, looking at the proportion of textiles, it has the highest improvement in growth. In regard to petroleum products, the amount gained by 2016 is 62
billion
which is the largest income that happened in 2016 but looking at the percentage it has a slight rise of 3%
than
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the previous year.
Whereas
Engineering goods were the second largest source for the country with 61
billion
and had an improvement of 8.5% in growth. Looking at the figure for Gems and Jewellery, it had decreased to 5.18% value in 2016, with a rate of approximately 40
billion
.
On the other hand
, textile Industries had an appreciatable hike of 15.24% which is the highest change that occurred in 2016 with 31
billion
. ,
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the agricultural products had an 0.81% increase by the year 2016 with the same value as textiles.
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