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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Nowadays, poverty has increasingly become popular. Despite the breakthrough in the
agriculture
 field , some people still suffer from poverty. There are many factors that play a role in people's hunger which will explain them with the solutions in detail.
To begin
 with problems, Inadequate infrastructure in rural areas is one of the important troubles
such
 as lack of transportation and storage facilities .That results to hamper the distribution and
food
 storage from wasting.
Secondly
, climate changes and natural disasters pose challenges to
agriculture
 productivity that
disrupting
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 crops and losing
livestocks
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livestock
. 
For example
, the flood that happened In
Netherland
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Netherlands
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 resulted in
a
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the
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 damage of
many
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much
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 grain land , and the outcome of grain production in
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the Netherland
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Netherland
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 was reduced by 40 per cent compared to the previous .
In addition
, conflicts and political instability will reflect negative feedback on the country 's economic .
consequently
 , they often face deterioration of
food
 production, trade , distribution and access.which
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results
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result
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inresult
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food
 scarcity and increased vulnerability to hungry. To start with solutions,encourage sustainable
agriculture
 methods like promoting efficient irrigation and supporting agroforestry, all of these can enhance the production of the country and resilience to climate change.
Moreover
, Investment in rural areas through developing rural areas and implementing transportation networks,storage facilities , and market access which improve the movement of
food
 and avoid deteriorating
food
, And political stability and peace-building efforts
also
 play a crucial role to overcome poverty and prosper the economy. In conclusion,
although
 the development in
agriculture
, people still strive in some countries. There main
factor
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factors
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 that lead to
food
 scarcity
such
 lack of infrastructure, weather and conflict.
However
, there are solutions which conquer the obstacles and avoid inequalities
of
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food
 supply.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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