There is a growing demand for fresh water nowadays and this is becoming a global problem. What are the causes and solutions?

presently, there is an increasing

demand

for clean

water

and

this

problem

is international. In the following

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I will discuss the reasons behind it and provide some solutions for each

problem

. The first reason

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growing

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demand

for

water

is that the depletion of underwater sources becomes a serious issue.

An excessive

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water

withdrawal from underwater sources brings many

problem

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(s) for

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people all around the world.

For example

, In Iran, many wells and aqueducts began to drought because of

an

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excessive

water

waste. To address the issue, rationing the remaining

water

might be a practical approach in order for

wasting

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water

reduction. The government plays an important role in controlling

water

usage. Overpopulation might be another reason

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/

this

)increasing

demand

. Presently, the world’s

population

is increasing every day.

Therefore

, it is very likely that the

demand

has

also

risen to some extent.

For example

, if the

population

increases from 8 billion to 10 billion in the entire world(,) the

water

withdrawal may increase to 30%, which may lead to acute

water

shortages. In

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other word, the more of the

population

(,) the less

of

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the

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fresh

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water

. To tackle the

problem

,constructing some large treatment plants might be another beneficial approach in order to overcome

this

obstacle. In conclusion,

an

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excessive

water

withdrawal and

population

congestion are the reasons why the

demand

for clean

water

is increasing every day.

Moreover

, the government plays an important role to address each issue. rationing the global

water

and erecting large treatment

plant

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are practical ways in order to solve the

problem

with the government.