The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart demonstrates the
quantity
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number
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of overseas
visitors
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by
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in
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three distinct fields, which are the coast, mountains, and lakes, in a European country, ranging from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
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, in
10-year
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a 10-year
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span, the number of
visitors
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increased compared
the
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to the
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initial rate in all areas.
However
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, the most significant growth being seen in the chart is the quantity of
the
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apply
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coast
visitors
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.
Whereas
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the number of
the
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apply
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coast
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coastal
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visitors
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decreased (from 40000 to around 35000) until about the middle of 1992, the mountains and the lakes rose to around 35000.
However
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,
the
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in the
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following years, all of them rose till approximately the middle of 1997.
While
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the number of
the
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apply
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mountains
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mountain
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visitors
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remained unchanging, those of the others soared in 2002. From mid-2002 until the end of the given time frame,
while
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the lakes dramatically plunged from about 75000 to 50000, coasts and the lakes’
visitors
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escalated, with around 75000,
35000
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and 35000
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, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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