The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart demonstrates the
quantity
of overseas Change the quantifier
number
visitors
by
three distinct fields, which are the coast, mountains, and lakes, in a European country, ranging from 1987 to 2007.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, in 10-year
span, the number of Add an article
a 10-year
the 10-year
visitors
increased compared the
initial rate in all areas. Change preposition
to the
However
, the most significant growth being seen in the chart is the quantity of the
coast Correct article usage
apply
visitors
.
Whereas
the number of the
Correct article usage
apply
coast
Replace the word
coastal
visitors
decreased (from 40000 to around 35000) until about the middle of 1992, the mountains and the lakes rose to around 35000. However
, the
following years, all of them rose till approximately the middle of 1997. Change preposition
in the
While
the number of the
Correct article usage
apply
mountains
Change the noun form
mountain
visitors
remained unchanging, those of the others soared in 2002. From mid-2002 until the end of the given time frame, while
the lakes dramatically plunged from about 75000 to 50000, coasts and the lakes’ visitors
escalated, with around 75000, 35000
, respectively.Correct word choice
and 35000
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