The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map illustrates the changes in public Grange
Park
in 1920 when it was constructed and today.At first glance, it can be seen that
park
had total change nowadays with no similarities from 1920
instead
of the entrance
that
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remained the same
To begin
with new installations, there were added extra underground
entrance
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for cars in the right bottom corner of the
park
and a playground for children that was built in place of a pond with water plants.
Instead
of the pond there was constructed new water feature in the right side of the entrance. In 1920 there were 3 rose gardens on 3 different sides of the
park
, but today those gardens are assembled into one in the centre of the
park
and the fountain that was placed there has been removed. On the left of the
fountain
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there was a stage for celebrities that was modernised to the theatre for the concerts.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • alterations
  • renovations
  • modernize
  • upgraded
  • transformed
  • landscaping
  • facilities
  • amenities
  • preservation
  • heritage
  • green spaces
  • eco-friendly
  • public space
  • community impact
  • historical elements
  • conservation
  • recreational areas
  • urban planning
  • sustainable development
  • layout
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