The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Park

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in 1920 when it was constructed and today.At first glance, it can be seen that

park

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had total change nowadays with no similarities from 1920

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of the entrance

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remained the same

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with new installations, there were added extra underground

entrance

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for cars in the right bottom corner of the

park

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and a playground for children that was built in place of a pond with water plants.

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of the pond there was constructed new water feature in the right side of the entrance. In 1920 there were 3 rose gardens on 3 different sides of the

park

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, but today those gardens are assembled into one in the centre of the

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and the fountain that was placed there has been removed. On the left of the

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there was a stage for celebrities that was modernised to the theatre for the concerts.