An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

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of professionals ,
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doctors
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and
teachers
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, are leaving their underdeveloped
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in order to work in developed
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. There are a number of reasons behind
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issue and the main one of that, there is not any professional development to deal with that other workers who have various skills should return to their homelands.
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, a lot of
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do not have professional development opportunities. First and foremost, lack of income. Most
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the
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people want to earn more money. But they do not have a
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to land a job easily.
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that
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individuals go to
another country
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for making a profit.
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generation want to study in good condition with well-qualified
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.
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is because they have experience and they know how
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with students.
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, many
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go
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overseas to have well-paid jobs. Because in other
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for workers who have different skills can get their jobs easily and have
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salary.
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, if their relative live in the city, which, they want to go
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be
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factor for going
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abroad.
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,
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have to improve facilities and resources in order to have highly-qualified
teachers
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and
doctors
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. First of all, if they create more job opportunities,
doctors
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and
teachers
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may come back to share their
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experiences
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with others. Nowadays
small
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amount of
doctors
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come back to their professional
doctors
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to help other citizens. Second of all, most of the
teachers
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go to
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foreign
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, because of their goals. After achieving their goals, they might return to their hometowns.
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, a great
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of employees may return after general improvement of the situation in the homeland.
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, many professionals are leaving their
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and
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cause for
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is mainly lack of income.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Brain drain
  • Skilled professionals
  • Healthcare systems
  • Education systems
  • Economic growth
  • Dependency on foreign aid
  • Social inequality
  • Quality healthcare
  • Quality education
  • Retain talent
  • International cooperation
  • Sustainable growth
  • Scholarships
  • Professional development
  • Remote work capabilities
  • Local research funding
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