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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

#professionals #doctors #teachers #countries #work #situation
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amount
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 of professionals ,
such
 as
doctors
 and
teachers
, are leaving their underdeveloped
countries
 in order to work in developed
countries
. There are a number of reasons behind
this
 issue and the main one of that, there is not any professional development to deal with that other workers who have various skills should return to their homelands.
Initially
, a lot of
countries
 do not have professional development opportunities. First and foremost, lack of income. Most
of
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the
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people want to earn more money. But they do not have a
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 to land a job easily.
Due to
 that
fact
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 individuals go to
another country
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other countries
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 for making a profit.
In addition
 to that
young
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 generation want to study in good condition with well-qualified
teachers
.
This
 is because they have experience and they know how
work
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 with students.
Also
, many
doctors
 go
to
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overseas to have well-paid jobs. Because in other
countries
 for workers who have different skills can get their jobs easily and have
high
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 salary.
Furthermore
, if their relative live in the city, which, they want to go
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 be
triggering
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 factor for going
to
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abroad.
However
,
government
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the government
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 have to improve facilities and resources in order to have highly-qualified
teachers
 and
doctors
. First of all, if they create more job opportunities,
doctors
 and
teachers
 may come back to share their
experience
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experiences
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 with others. Nowadays
small
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 amount of
doctors
 come back to their professional
doctors
 to help other citizens. Second of all, most of the
teachers
 go to
the
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foreign
countries
, because of their goals. After achieving their goals, they might return to their hometowns.
In addition
, a great
amount
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 of employees may return after general improvement of the situation in the homeland.
To sum up
, many professionals are leaving their
countries
 and
significant
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 cause for
this
 is mainly lack of income.
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