The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter.

The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter.
The chart gives information about the
number
of
people
who visit a
museum
in summer and winter in the United Kingdom.
Overall
, summer is by far the most popular season for
visitors
.
Besides
this
, in both seasons, mornings are preferred by
visitors
while
after noon, the
number
of visits commences to decrease.
To begin
with, in summer, since the
museum
opens its doors, the
number
of
people
coming in rises exponentially to reach over 1200
visitors
after 10 am,
then
it keeps increasing until arrives at its peak between 11 am and 12
pm
to around 1500
visitors
.
After
this
time
, a downtrend commences. Before 2
pm
the
museum
has around 1100
people
and
then
continues decreasing, having after 2
pm
around 900
visitors
.
Finally
, before 4
pm
, the
museum
has approximately 800
visitors
and
after
this
time
the
number
dramatically decreases until the close
time
.
On the other hand
, in winter, the
museum
receives around 500
visitors
at 10 am, and from
this
time
until before noon, the
number
of
people
fluctuates, decreasing to over 400
visitors
after 10 am and
then
increasing to almost 600 around 11 am.
After
this
time
, it decreases again to over 400, to
then
increase one more
time
to 600
visitors
just before 12pm, which is its maximum peak. In the following hours, the
number
of
visitors
goes down drastically until no one left after 2pm.
After
this
time
, no more
visitors
come in until the close
time
at 6pm.
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