You need to take leave from your work of over one month for personal reasons.Write a letter to your boss.In your letter: Explain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need Explain how you will keep up-to-date while you're away Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Dear Sir or Madam.I am writing to you

request

Fix the infinitive

to request

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one

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apply

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month

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month's

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holiday

due to

some personal problems .The reason I have a slight fever and a cold,so please excuse me. I went to the doctor

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for

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treat

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treatment

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. He said to me that pain had

been appeared

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appeared

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cold and damp days. It should be prevented by timely treatment. If it is not prevented now it will increase

day

. Don't worry about anything. I'll work hard for you just be good. When you are sick like

this

if you don't treat it can get worse

day

. I'll get you the

presciptions

Correct your spelling

prescriptions

prescription

from the doctor. The doctor prescribed prescriptions he was treated and

become

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became

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healthy. He thank you for everything. Yours

faithully

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faithfully

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

123 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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