You would like to apply for a full-time position at an international airport. Write to the human resource department and say. -What job you are interested in -Explain what you are currently doing - Why do you think you are best candidate for the job

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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to apply for the open position at your airport in the human resource department. I am Jaskaran Singh Awal, I have completed MBA in human resources with 90 per cent. I want to apply for the human resource manager because you mentioned in your advert that you need a candidate with at least 3 years of work experience, and I have 4 years of experience in

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field. Currently, I am working as a human resource manager at Oberoi’s group of hotels in Mumbai.

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, I am managing a team of 10 members, where I take interviews for the recruitment of new staff. Since I have responsibilities in both human resources

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I possess leadership skills ,

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, I would be a perfect candidate for the job. I have

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been awarded the Best

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year. Awaiting your prompt reply. Yours Faithfully, Jaskaran Singh Awal

KaranAwal15Fri Jul 14 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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8 paragraphs

156 words

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You would like to apply for a full-time position at an international airport. Write to the human resource department and say. -What job you are interested in -Explain what you are currently doing - Why do you think you are best candidate for the job

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