The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada.
The bar chart gives information about four different
places
visited by people living in Canada. The four places
shown are Cinema, theatre, library and zoo. The three different kinds of people taken into consideration are new migrants born in English-speaking countries, new migrants born in other countries and people born in Canada.
Overall
, it can be argued that Cinemas are the most visited places
, while
theatres are the less visited. Moreover
, new migrants born in other countries seem to love spending their time in libraries. On the other hand
, they seem to dislike spending their time in theatres. These two tendencies could be connected with the language.
Focusing on details, more than 50% of the three categories took in
consideration usually visited cinemas, Change preposition
into
while
less than 25% of them visited theatres. Zoos and libraries are places
that each of the categories used to visit with a percentage that goes between 35 % and 55%.Submitted by Andrea Barreto on
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