the chart below shows the number of passengers arriving at a train station per hour across a day,and also the average price (in US DOllars) of their tickets.

the chart below shows the number of passengers arriving at a train station per hour across a day,and also the average price (in US DOllars) of their tickets.
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Overall
, the chart represents the total number of travellers visiting the train station every hour of the day and the approximate US Dollars they spend on their tickets.
Firstly
, it can be clearly observed that a maximum number of people arrive train station by 12
PM
and spend the most on each ticket i.e., thirty-one US Dollars.
In addition
, we can see the exact opposite trend at 4
PM
.
Similarly
, the price of tickets is reduced to eleven by 6
PM
.
Further
, it is very interesting to see that the cost of a pass is fluctuating every two hours. In the morning time, before 10 AM, it was between twenty and thirty.
Moreover
, after two hours, it became just less than twenty. By mid-day, it touched its peak level.
However
, after that, the fee for tickets begins to drop gradually till 6
PM
. Again, at 8
PM
, the fare reached twenty-two. By the end of the day, the price was slightly reduced to eighteen.
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