The charts below shows male and female arrested over the 5 years and the reason for most recent arrests. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart indicates the percentage of arrested
males
and females
from 1989 to 1994, and the bar graph gives information about the cause of the most recent arrests
.
Males
predominated in the number
of crimes over the five-year period, and public drinking was the most major reason for the arrest of both genders.
The proportion of crimes committed by males
almost quadrupled (32%) compared to the number
for females
, which accounted for only 9 %. It is apparent that the majority reason for the arrests
in both genders were drinking in public and those figures occupied over 30% among seven reasons
; 30.5% in males
and 37% in females
. The figure for drinking and driving in men consisted of a quarter of the total which placed the second highest number
of reasons
for the arrests
. The rest of the arrests
, such
as other reasons
, breach of the order, and assault were 19%, 17%, and 15.5% respectively. It was just below 5% of male crimes who did not want to answer the reason for their arrests
.
On the other hand
, there have been some differences in the reasons
for arrests
between men and women. The second largest percentage of the arrest was an assault in females
which almost halved (18%) compared to those figures for public drinking, followed by other reasons
at 17%, drinking and driving at 14%, breach of order and theft was 12%. In terms of no answer, this
case had the least percentage (7%) in females
and a similar number
was observed in males
.
Overall
, arrested males
occupied a third of the total and the figures of the reasons
for the arrests
in both genders varied apart from public drinking.Submitted by slowloris4444 on
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