The pie charts show the main reason for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts show the main reason for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
why people migrate to and from the UK in the year 2007.
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job is largely the reason why migrants are
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the UK and people leaving the UK, which accounts
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a third of the par
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