In the modern world, people are no longer necessary to use food from animals or products from animals such as medicine and clothing. Agree or disagree?

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the recent debate on whether people still need animal-related

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,

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as food or medicine does not seem to come to an end any time soon.

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most supplies from

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have been acknowledged as necessary in human life, other alternatives should be considered beneficial. There are a number of reasons why switching to

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other

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rather than exploiting

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is imperative.

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since foods made of

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are not healthy, consuming them can put human health in jeopardy. In fact, animal flesh is loaded with contaminants, antibiotics, hormones, and a host of toxins which can cause serious health problems

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as food poisoning or allergic reaction.

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by avoiding meat and eating a whole-food, plant-based diet, people can have better health Plenty of evidence suggests that fruits and vegetables offer vitamins, minerals, and other nutrients which may help reduce the risk of many diseases, including heart disease and some types of cancer.

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, humans should care for animal well-being as there are many clear ethical arguments against animal exploitation.

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it is immoral and inhumane when making

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suffer or even die, either killing or hurting them for medicine or clothes.

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means that

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actions go against a civilized society and human moral values when we either abuse or infringe upon animal rights, leading to unfairness to other living creatures.

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preventing humans from hunting

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for

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to some extent, is a way to preserve the environment. It should be noted that the extinction of any animal species is irreversible, coming at a great cost to the ecosystem and apparently humans living within it. In conclusion, reducing the consumption of

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from

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is conducive not only to

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to the environment. By raising awareness of people about the benefits of becoming less reliant on

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animals’

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, they can lead a better life now and down the road.