The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants.

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the table depicts the proportion number of usage electricity

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occupants per year in the units measured by kilowatts per year.

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, it's clear that Heating and cooling presented the highest ratio of energy consumption volume around 38% and 25% of the whole total.

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The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants.

Some school are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, While other schools have a very relaxed dress code. (What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?)

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