Some people think that we lean best through in-person interaction with a teacher in a classroom. Others believe that online learning is more effective. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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new era of technology, e-learning has
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increasingly common. Digital learning helped
people
to improve their career paths even
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working for a company or in
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office.
However
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according to
some
people
traditional learning is the most practical way to learn subjects,
while
others think that online learning is more efficient.
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discuss more about these topics in upcoming paragraphs. First of all, traditional ways of learning are beneficial for social interactions and
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for
students
in general. Specifically for kids with learning disabilities like Dyslexia, ADHD, etc personal interaction will improve the quality of learning, and direct teaching can help
students
to build a deeper connection with their mentors.
Furthermore
, direct learning helps
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and team rapport among the children.
In contrast
, some of the cons of in-person learning are that
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people
will be shy to talk more in person than others, boring lectures, commuting difficulties, overcharging fees and
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accommodations
accommodation
etc.
Hence
,
people
will make cheaper choices than
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learning techniques.
Secondly
, with the rise of digital in all areas of life, we are seeing an increase in the usage of digital services in learning. One of the major advantages is full-time access to learning materials, a live recorded class will help the
students
refer to it whenever they have doubts. In short, personalized or one-on-one learning, self-directed learning,
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or graphical representation of
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will improve learning abilities, digital assessment, tracking
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progress
, etc. Another key point, web-based learning offers a wide range of delivery methods in the form of audio, video, imagery, and
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seamlessly integrated into lessons. Even some teachers go far up
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software that enhances the topic they are teaching into games.
To conclude
, Digital education provides a range of content types that engage
students
. In my view, technology-enhanced learning is more effective and accessible than traditional education.
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  • immediate feedback
  • retention of information
  • sense of community
  • social and communication skills
  • controlled learning environment
  • flexibility in scheduling
  • online resources and tools
  • cater to different learning styles
  • learn at their own pace
  • complex subjects
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