Nowadays a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicine and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is positive or a negative development?

Nowadays,

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of

disease

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diseases

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have become a common problem in our society, but individuals are applying

remedies

instead

of actual

treatment

to

doctors

. Because of

this

,

health

could become

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concern to maintain in regular life. It seems to me that,

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perception

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could perform better rather than

remedies

.

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with,

disease

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the disease

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dilemma has surged to

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point, where people are frequently get attracted to it. There are

fever

, normal

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, headaches,

stomaches

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are considered

as

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a normal

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normal health complications

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health

complications. But we should have to be more aware of

this

. Because

,

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who knows when normal

fever

could turn into

bigger

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issue in

overall

health

structure.

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, people should have

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not only put

their

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reliance on

doctors

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medicine

but

also

talking

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taking

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care of

ourselves

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,

while

eating outside food. So far that reason,

general

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public should have to think twice, before taking

home

or alternate

treatment

.

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,

fever

could spread easily through coughing,

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, yet it could become

viral

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infection too.

However

, visiting your nearest doctor will be the most preferable option, rather than

home

remedies

.

On the other hand

, somehow I believe that having basic knowledge about common

disease

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diseases

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and their

treatment

is impressive. Even though, we could take care of ourselves in

situation

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situations

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, where we

unable

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are unable

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to visit physicians.

For instance

,

either

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whether

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it

about

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is about

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treatment

or usage of

medicine

according to

it

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concern,

at

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the end it will give us benefits. Whether it’s about positive or negative development, alternate

home

remedies

had a quick effectiveness in some cases, but we should have to check

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the doses

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doses

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amount. To illustrate

to

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this

, researchers have found historical evidence,

how

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of how

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people used to make

medicine

from

home

ingredients.

Although

, we should

considered

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consider

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both

doctors

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doctor's

doctors'

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perception

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perceptions

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and

home

medicine

,

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unless we have to face consequences. In conclusion, knowledge about common

treatment

is safe, but taking high doses of

medicine

doctors

suggestion

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would turn side effects on body

health

. And so it could be dangerous too. In my opinion, normal

fever

can

also

be treated by paracetamol, yet we should seek

doctors

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doctors'

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help even if

its

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it's

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common

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a common

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problem.