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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the result of a survey conducted in 5 different cities in Australia:
Sydney
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,
Melbourne
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, Brisbane,
Adelaide
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 and
Hobart
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. The survey focused on the population's preferences and habits regarding buying and drinking
coffee
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 and tea over the past four weeks.
Overall
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, the majority of Australians tended to go to a café for
coffee
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 or tea,
Adelaide
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 was the only city that deviated from
this
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 trend,
while
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 fresh
coffee
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 was the least favoured option in all five Downunder cities. In the
last
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 four weeks, going to a café has been the prevailing trend in
Sydney
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,
Melbourne
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, Brisbane and
Hobart
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, with over 60% of residents in
Sydney
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,
Melbourne
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 and
Hobart
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 choosing
this
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 option,
while
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 slightly over 55% of Brisbane’s population preferring it.
Adelaide
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 stood out as the only city where buying instant
coffee
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 outnumbered going to a café, accounting for 50% and 49% respectively.
On the other hand
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, buying fresh
coffee
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 was the least popular option for the residents of all five cities, with
Sydney
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 (44%) and
Melbourne
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 (42%) being the highest share of the population preferring fresh
coffee
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, and Brisbane and
Adelaide
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 presenting the lowest percentage, both at around less than 35%.
Adelaide
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 and
Hobart
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 showed a significant difference between the least and second-to-least preferred options,
whereas
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Sydney
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 and
Melbourne
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 exhibited less variation.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sydney, melbourne, adelaide, hobart, coffee with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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