The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

#show #percentages #meals #three #nutrients #information #features #comparisons

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

The pie charts provide information on the average proportions of common foods (breakfast, lunch, dinner, and snacks) with

sodium

Use synonyms

, saturated fat, and added sugar whose excessive consumption is considered to be unhealthy.

Overall

Linking Words

, snacks have the largest percentages of added sugar as compared to the other kinds of meals.

However

Linking Words

, dinner and lunch are seen to account for approximately the same amounts of all the nutrients. In terms of dinner,

sodium

Use synonyms

has the largest percentage of 43 followed by saturated fat and added sweets with 37% and 23% respectively. The same trend can be observed for lunch with the highest being 29% followed by 26% and

then

Linking Words

19%. Moving on to breakfast, saturated fat and added sugar had equal figures of 16% with 2% lower

sodium

Use synonyms

. It is evident that snacks had the most in all three categories with 42% followed

secondly

Linking Words

by saturated fats with 21% and

sodium

Use synonyms

last

Linking Words

at 14%

Submitted by obdemawuena on Sat Jul 15 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.

▼

Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium with synonyms.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.

▼

Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

▼

5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

152 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

average percentages
nutrients
unhealthy
meal
typical meals
categories
high percentage
distribution
patterns
trends
nutrient-dense
data
comparison
summarize
reporting main features

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7.5
band
Some educationist think that the international exchange visit to different countries for a teenager from school has benefits. To what extend do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Travelling and learning about a new place, culture, and standard of living of different people from various countries from a very young age would help children have better growth and development. International visits to different countries and exploring places with friends and teachers would have both advantages and disadvantages to the teenagers at school. In my opinion, it has more benefits compared to the drawbacks.
4
band
Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does the shortage of fresh water cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The problem of depletion of fresh water is raising concerns globally and there are multitude of reasons affecting the availability of water. There are numerous solutions to solve the issue by implemeting some of the strategies which will be examined further in this essay.
4.5
band
It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn about this distinction To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
It is essential for children to learn about right and wrong things. Because at an early age, they do not have experience to differentiate it. So it is necessary to teach the distinction by using punishments. This essay agree with this statement because, children lack decision making ability and hormonal imbalance.
<4
band
advanteges and disadvantages of playing video games for children
Nowadays children around the world have their own cutting edge devices and enjoy a lot of games or virtual reality games. Entire world parents tend to give children devices and be more free time for their leisure. This essay give information about benefits and drawbacks of playing video games for children.
7.5
band
If a person is found to be under the influence of drugs or alcohol while driving, they should be banned from driving for life, whether they were involved in an accident or not. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that if there is an accident or not, anyone is caught driving drunk or consuming bad substances should be prohibited from driving for life. I totally agree with the statement, because they have done it once and they will do it again, and also they can be a reason for someone’s death.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some educationist think that the international exchange visit to different countries for a teenager from school has benefits. To what extend do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does the shortage of fresh water cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

advanteges and disadvantages of playing video games for children

If a person is found to be under the influence of drugs or alcohol while driving, they should be banned from driving for life, whether they were involved in an accident or not. To what extent do you agree or disagree?