Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a new way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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human
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humans
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climate
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?'. Industrial production, deforestation, poisonous gases,... is the main reasons Use synonyms
lead
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that lead
climate
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. Government, Use synonyms
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schools
people
around us always tell us to Correct word choice
and people
use
less electricity, should not Use synonyms
use
wood products, Use synonyms
not
to litter,... But someone thinks that people should try to live with Correct word choice
and not
climate
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change
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instead
of preventing it.
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this
idea. If we don't have any way to prevent Linking Words
climate
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change
, a lot of problems will happen. We can see Use synonyms
consequences
of Correct article usage
the consequences
climate
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change
. The number of tempests Use synonyms
have
doubled for the Change the verb form
has
last
30 years. Linking Words
Green house
effect makes the world hotter Correct your spelling
Greenhouse
everyday
, Replace the word
every day
ices
in the ocean melt slowly, and it Fix the agreement mistake
ice
cause
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causes
increase
in sea level. High Add an article
an increase
tempuratures
can make many animals and plants have Correct your spelling
temperatures
ability
to be extinct. Some countries do not have enough water for Change the article
the ability
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people
daily activities. Prolonged drought, flood, starvation, storm,.... if we just ignore Change noun form
people's
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and find some way to live peacefully and still destroy the environment with no regret, our next generation will face the worst consequences Use synonyms
can
happen.
We can prevent Correct pronoun usage
that can
climate
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change
by changing some Use synonyms
habit
, it is not too hard but it can help a lot. You should limit eating or using dairy products and eat more vegetables because planted-based food creates fewer greenhouse gas than meat or dairy products. Using buses, trains, bikes or public vehicles Fix the agreement mistake
habits
instead
of your personal car or Linking Words
motocycle
. Trying not to go on a plane unless Correct your spelling
motorcycle
it
necessary, a flight can waste a large amount of fossil fuel. You should save Add a verb
isit
wasit
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energy
in your house by turning off Use synonyms
electricial
appliances when Correct your spelling
electric
we
do not Correct pronoun usage
you
use
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it
. Or you can think about using solar Correct pronoun usage
them
energy
, solar Use synonyms
energy
is a renewable Use synonyms
energy
source, you just have to put the solar panels on your rooftop and Use synonyms
use
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energy
from the sun. There are many ways to prevent Use synonyms
climate
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change
easily, if you Use synonyms
wan t
to do it, you will do it.
We should find ways to Correct your spelling
want
slowdown
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slow down
the
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climate
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change
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instead
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find
reasons to continue destroying the natural environment. "Change the form of the verb
finding
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of preventing Linking Words
climate
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change
, we need to find a new way to live with it" is a lazy, irresponsible idea.Use synonyms
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