Some people believe that professional, such as doctors and engineers should be require to work in the country where they did their training. Other believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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experts
whereas
some would argue that professionals should continue their practice where they have graduated. While
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others
perspective
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perspectives
of
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on
freedom
to explore their opportunities. It seems to me that, individuals should decide their own desire where to go.
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the freedom
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,
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with
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also
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helping
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think that professional workers should continue their future Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
life
in same
country where they have completed their education. Change the article
the same
In addition
, professional physicians and engineers should prioritise their country first,
and so this
will connect roots to normal person
to help them. Fix the agreement mistake
people
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in
nation
that had provided them Add an article
a nation
the nation
infrastructure
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the infrastructure
a
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field
. So for that Correct article usage
the field
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in
medical
and engineering would help Replace the word
medicine
whole
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the whole
nation
to get developed.
On the other hand
, there are few people who think that professional workers should also
have freedom
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the freedom
developed
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a developed
nation
or help
people and Wrong verb form
helping
refugee
of undeveloped regions. Fix the agreement mistake
refugees
For instance
, many would chose
to continue their professional Change the verb form
choose
life
in foreign countries, which will provide the
broader and huge opportunity to pursue Correct article usage
a
in
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apply
further
life
. To illustrate to
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this
, if physician
or any expert Add an article
a physician
the physician
get
paid highly, and Correct subject-verb agreement
gets
also
bright assurance in personal life
. Then
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in order to secure their career, rather than relying on Change the verb form
choose
opportunity
to hit.
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the opportunity
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require
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requires
expert
in every field to push their growth capital, but giving them no Add an article
an expert
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independence
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regarding
its
an individual choice with various Replace the word
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it is
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perspectives
in
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on
to begin
, but choosing nation
ought to be our first priority.Correct article usage
a nation
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