The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
The diagram illustrates several steps of how the production of electricity is carried out by using geothermal energy.
Generally,
It is clear that
there are 5 main stages in this
process, starting with getting cold water from the land surface and ending with the electricity produced by a generator.
As can be seen, during the first stage, cold water is collected from an overground dam and pumped down the underground at a distance of 4.5 km long. After being taken to an injection well, it undergoes the geothermal zone which consists of hot rocks in order to be heated up.
Once becoming hotter, the liquid is transferred to the production well so that it is brought up to the surface where a condenser is installed. Next,
the steam from the hot water is condensed and used to power the turbine. Subsequently
, as long as the turbine works, energy is created to run the generator and finally
, electricity is manufactured and conveyed to the geothermal power plant.Submitted by danphamngocha on
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