The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
Both maps demonstrate how did transform the entrance to a
city
hospital from 2007 to 2010. Over the period, the area of the
city
hospital changed dramatically by adding public places around the hospital. Separate
car
parks and bus stops are the foremost developments which have been done in
this
area during
this
period. The most noticeable addition is a public bus terminal.
Furthermore
, it is constructed to the southwest of the
city
health care centre with
two
main entrances and connected to the
two
roundabouts.
However
, these roundabouts were built on the
two
extremes of the hospital road. Looking at these plans,
although
common and hospital worker's
car
parks were situated in one place, which was between the hospital entrance and
city
road in 2007 it has totally rebuilt in
two
locations by 2010. On the one hand, a public
car
park was constructed on the east side of the health care centre.
On the other hand
, the staff
car
park modernized in the place, which has situated in an old one.
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  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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