the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories durin 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage cahnge in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

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The chart gives information about the export earnings in 5 categories in 2 years.

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, the table illustrates the value of changes in each category between 2015 and 2016.

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, petroleum

products

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ranked

first

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in both years in export earnings.

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, textiles stood

first

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in the table,

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; it ranked

last

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in it. Looking

first

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at the chart, petroleum

products

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ranked

first

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in 20155 and 2016,

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; the former formed approximately 60% and the latter accounted for over 60%.

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, engineered goods contributed under 60% in 2015 and over 60% in 2016. Gems and goods in 2015 were just approximately 2% higher than in 2016. Agricultural

products

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produced the highest amount of export earnings in 2016 and the remaining just over one-fifth and over 30% were allocated to 2015 and 2016 respectively. Going forward to the table, petroleum experienced a slight rose.

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, engineered goods increased minimally and reached 8.5%. Gems and jewellery saw a moderate decline.

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, agricultural

products

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had minimal growth and stood at 0.81%. The

last

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one which is textiles experienced a dramatic soured and peaked at 15.24%.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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