the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories durin 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage cahnge in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories durin 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage cahnge in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. 

summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The chart gives information about the export earnings in 5 categories in 2 years.
Moreover
, the table illustrates the value of changes in each category between 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, petroleum
products
ranked
first
in both years in export earnings.
Furthermore
, textiles stood
first
in the table,
however
; it ranked
last
in it. Looking
first
at the chart, petroleum
products
ranked
first
in 20155 and 2016,
however
; the former formed approximately 60% and the latter accounted for over 60%.
In addition
, engineered goods contributed under 60% in 2015 and over 60% in 2016. Gems and goods in 2015 were just approximately 2% higher than in 2016. Agricultural
products
produced the highest amount of export earnings in 2016 and the remaining just over one-fifth and over 30% were allocated to 2015 and 2016 respectively. Going forward to the table, petroleum experienced a slight rose.
Furthermore
, engineered goods increased minimally and reached 8.5%. Gems and jewellery saw a moderate decline.
Moreover
, agricultural
products
had minimal growth and stood at 0.81%. The
last
one which is textiles experienced a dramatic soured and peaked at 15.24%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore, however, last, moreover".
Vocabulary: Replace the words products, first with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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