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Some people think that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people’s behavior. What is your opinion?

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In
this
 era, the usage of video
games
 on different
types
 of play stations is increasing day by day.
Children
 enjoy these modern sorts of
games
 with full concentration. Many
games
 are related to violence, like fighting with each other in groups. The effects of these
types
 of
games
 are too dangerous for society.
However
, fewer
people
 think that these
types
 of
games
 have any major effects on an individual’s behaviour. In the following paragraphs, I will explain the reasons and my opinion about how these
types
 of
games
 destroy
children
's lives in our society. In the beginning,
according to
 fewer
people
,
children
 played different sorts of
games
 in different ways. Few
children
 prefer to play
games
 on computers and mobile phones, but others play on the latest play stations. Modern
types
 of
games
 are based on fighting themes like attacking and fighting with each other, etc. The PUBG game is the best example. In
this
 game, a battlefield is created, and 100
people
 are dropped into it. They are in the form of groups, and each group contains four members. They all fight with the help of different
types
 of latest arms with each other. In 2020, a crime was reported in Lahore, Pakistan, where a boy killed her mother and sister with a gun, just like
this
 game theme. After investigating
this
 case, it was clear that the boy plays a lot of PUBG and is now not mentally stable. The same scenario
also
 happened in New Zealand, where a man killed many
people
 in a mosque. Others,
however
, argue that these
types
 of
games
 have no negative impact on an individual's life.
Furthermore
, these
games
 increase the
children
's power of command and decision-making.
To conclude
, the bad effects of these are overweight. Many incidents occur
due to
 these
types
 of violent
games
.
However
, there are just a few benefits to these
games
, like increasing decision power.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • desensitize
  • aggressive behavior
  • perceptions
  • correlation
  • individual susceptibility
  • media literacy
  • critical thinking
  • interpret
  • regulating
  • negative effects
  • balance
  • societal measures
  • impact
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