the chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

the chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features
The picture shows the stages of manufacturing
bricks
for the building industry.
Overall
the whole process is composed of seven stages, starting from digging clay from the ground and ending with the delivery to customers.
To begin
with, the initial process to manufacture
bricks
is to break up soil from the ground using an excavator and send it to refine by removing large stones, and
this
can be done by roller and metal grid. After refining the soil, it mixes with sand and water for
further
procedure. When the mixture is ready, it sends to shape the brick and cut it with a wire cutter. After that, the
bricks
are stored in a drying oven for nearly two days and in the next stage placed in a cooling chamber for approximately three days. After a long process,
bricks
are ready for packaging and dispatch for delivery to distribute to customers.
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