The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.
The pie chart illustrates the information on the expenditures of the UAE annual cost in the year 2000.
It can be seen that the country had over 300
billion
AED (Arab Emirates Dinar) budget for the year from which most of the money was used for social security purposes.
To begin
with, the United Arab Emirates government spent around one-third of the allocation on the citizens' security purposes. Health and social services cost just above 50 billion
, but it is the second-highest money-taking sector. Moreover
, the third important field was education where a little under 40 billion
AED was the cost.
On the other hand
, three other sectors (debt interest, other expenditure and defence) received almost equal preferences where the first two areas took 23 billion
for each but the last
one had 1 billion
less money than that. Also
, the housing took 15 billion
dinar which is just two billion
less than the law and order field. Additionally
, industry, agriculture and employment were allotted for only 13 billion
which was the second lowest amount. Finally
, the least volume of total (9 billion
) was granted for transportation.Submitted by mostafiz.rahman.cse on
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