The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
The given line graphs
presents
the quantity and kind of Change the verb form
present
the
fast food utilized by Correct article usage
apply
the
Australian Correct article usage
apply
childern
in their Correct your spelling
children
teen
ages. The diagram shows Replace the word
teenage
this
information between the year
1975 to 2000.
The line graph presents the years on Fix the agreement mistake
years
X-coordinate
and the count of Correct article usage
the X-coordinate
meal
per Fix the agreement mistake
meals
year
. The food taken by the teenagers falls into three categories named Pizza
, Fish
and Chips
, and Hamsburgers
. In the Correct your spelling
Hamburgers
year
1975, the Pizza
was eaten least
number of Correct article usage
the least
times
, on average between 5-7 times
. However
, Hamsburgers
were served Correct your spelling
Hamburgers
for
approximately 10 Change preposition
apply
times
. Alternatively, in the same year
, for
about 100 Change preposition
apply
times
, the
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Fish
and chips
were given to children. Moreover
, in the year
38 fish
and chips
, 85 Pizzas, and 100 Hamburgers servings were made.
The trend of eating Fish
and chips
declined till the year
1980, but then
a sudden rise was noted uptill
Correct your spelling
up till
year
1985. Change the article
the year
However
, after
1985 till 2000, Change preposition
from
the
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apply
Fish
and Chips
were not so pouplar
among teen group people. Correct your spelling
popular
In addition
, the Hamburgers were
became famous between 1975 to mid of 1985. After Unnecessary verb
apply
the
half Correct article usage
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year
the
hamburgers Correct article usage
apply
were
had Unnecessary verb
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a
very little demand. Correct article usage
apply
In contrast
, pizza
became a choice of
teens from 1975 to 1995. Change preposition
for
After
1975 to 2000 the Change preposition
From
pizza
were
not taken more than 80.
Change the verb form
was
To sum up
, the line graph shows the food that was taken by australian
teenagers from 1975 to 2000. The figure shows the difference between the items Change the capitalization
Australian
such
as pizza
, fish
and chips
, and hamsburger
.Correct your spelling
hamburger
hamburgers
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, pizza, fish, chips, times with synonyms.
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