Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in seperate school, other believe that boys and girls benefits more from attending mixed school.
Well, someone
consider
teaching boys and girls individual or special schools, Change the verb form
considers
while
others would prefer to become united or mongrel Linking Words
school
. Based on both given ideas, it is partly true fact, but Use synonyms
i
pick out the initial opinion.
Change the capitalization
I
To begin
with, actually, others will support or hold on Linking Words
Linking Words
this
beneficial decision but other people will ignore that. Even though being ignorant, Change preposition
to this
i
agree to remain with Change the capitalization
I
this
selection without a doubt, if Linking Words
i
am going to an example about these, there are useful sides to Change the capitalization
I
study
in special schools. Wrong verb form
studying
Firstly
, they do not face Linking Words
to fall
in love with each other by connecting. Their image will be only to develop their careerChange the verb form
falling
,
if it will be separated. Remove the comma
apply
Secondly
, they manage to achieve their Linking Words
ambitious
easily by choosing a special Replace the word
ambitions
school
. Use synonyms
Such
as I might tell myself. When Linking Words
i
educated an individual Change the capitalization
I
school
, Use synonyms
i
obtained my objectives fastly.
To back the second position, Most people select to educate their offspring Change the capitalization
I
to
the mixed Change preposition
apply
school
. They thinkUse synonyms
,
it is better for their growth, Remove the comma
apply
according to
their field. Mostly, it will grant a bright future, only if boys and girls exchange their basic ideas or knowledge together. Linking Words
For instance
, Linking Words
also
my neighbours will support Linking Words
this
first thing. Linking Words
In addition
, they reckon to be good by performing their task together, after carrying out Linking Words
this
, their young generations cope with their goals without hesitation.
In conclusion, Linking Words
however
, there Linking Words
are
Change the verb form
is
utilization
of both views. I will restate the first circumstance, Add an article
the utilization
due to
flourishing my future.Linking Words
Submitted by sarvinozjumayeva813 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...