Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in seperate school, other believe that boys and girls benefits more from attending mixed school.

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teaching boys and girls individual or special schools,
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others would prefer to become united or mongrel
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pick out the initial opinion.
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with, actually, others will support or hold on
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this
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beneficial decision but other people will ignore that. Even though being ignorant,
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agree to remain with
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selection without a doubt, if
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am going to an example about these, there are useful sides to
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in special schools.
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, they do not face
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in love with each other by connecting. Their image will be only to develop their career
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if it will be separated.
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, they manage to achieve their
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easily by choosing a special
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as I might tell myself. When
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educated an individual
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,
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obtained my objectives fastly. To back the second position, Most people select to educate their offspring
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the mixed
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it is better for their growth,
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their field. Mostly, it will grant a bright future, only if boys and girls exchange their basic ideas or knowledge together.
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,
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my neighbours will support
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first thing.
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, they reckon to be good by performing their task together, after carrying out
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, their young generations cope with their goals without hesitation. In conclusion,
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, there
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utilization
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of both views. I will restate the first circumstance,
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flourishing my future.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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