The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart provides information on full-time and part-time
further
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done by males and females between the years 1970 to 1991 in Britain measured in thousands.
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, both sexes enrolled in part-time
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more than full-time studies over the time periods.
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generally increased their academic pursuits as their enrollment witnessed
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gradually over the years. In terms of part-time
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, men were interested more in the beginning as they accounted for 1000 in the 70s
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started off with 750. The number of males dropped by nearly 220 (880) in the second year (1980/81).
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,
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moved up to well over 800 and shot up to a peak of approximately 1090. It is evident that full-time
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was not popular during the three periods in Britain but
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, both genders had almost equal attendance rates around 250 in the 90s. Previously in the years the number of who participated in full-time
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women
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almost doubled the men’s number by marginally 220 because the males’ figure was below 200 in 1980
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