The graph gives information about the percentage of the population if four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph gives information about the percentage of the population if four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The line chart below illustrates the proportion of
population
in four different Asian nations, throughout the period from 1970 to 2020,
also
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and also
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reveals an indication of it from 2030 to 2040.
Overall
, all four countries experienced an increase in their
population
which seems set to continue in the future as well. At the beginning of the given period Philippines and Malaysia started with the same
population
rate
with
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approximately 30% of the total
population
, over time,
this
percentage increased dramatically in Malaysia and remained at the first position of
this
chart and it is estimated that will increase in the future,
while
Philippine witnessed a fluctuation and it is predicted that will rise to just over 55% and will reach the third position.
In contrast
,
at
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the beginning, Indonesia with 11% and Thailand with 12% were the countries with the lowest
population
rate compared to others.
Moreover
, Indonesia experienced a rise in its
population
and it is estimated will be five times more than the
number of
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population
at the beginning which will reach the second position.
Although
Thailand increased from 12% to 41%, will be remained with the least
population
in
this
chart.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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