The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

The chart shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers between 1975 and 2000. At the beginning of the period, 

fish

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and

chips

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had the highest

number

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of

times

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eaten per year among 

three

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the three

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fast food. The figure was the same as 100.   

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, the consumption of

hamburgers

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and

pizza

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were

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around 10

times

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and 5

times

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, respectively.

After

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this

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time, the

number

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of

times

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hamburgers

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eaten

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were eaten

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increased sharply at about the same rate to 1985, but  the

number

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of

times

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fish

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and

chips

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eaten

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were eaten

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went up and down to 1985. These figures were 85

times

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and 95

times

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in 1985, respectively. between 1985 and 2000,

threre

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there

was an interesting change. Growth in

the

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apply

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amount of consumption in  

hamburgers

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and

pizza

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grew steadily

while

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number

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a number

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of

times

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eaten

in

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apply

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fish

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and

chips

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plummeted remarkably.

As a

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result

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,result

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the figures

of

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for

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hamburgers

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and

pizza

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were more than one

of

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for

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fish

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and

chips

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.

Overall

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, it is seen that  

hamburgers

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and

pizza

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experienced

stable

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a stable

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growth pattern between 1975 and 2000. Meanwhile, the amount of

fish

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and

chips

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consumption rose with fluctuating.